Hi Damla and Kelvin this is a very unique piece of writing. I especially liked the way you mentioned the athletes names.I am excited as much as you are about the olympics coming to London.Do you know why the olympics take place?
I think your work is really wonderful to read and the puncuation is really good.
I am excited about the Olympics too.
Who is your favourite athlete?
keep your hard work going.
I hope you enjoy the Olympics and the Paraolympics.Your writing is really nice and I think you should write more about
the Olympics.
I’m very pleased about this work because it gives me a perfect image in my head.
Hi Damla and Kelvin this is a very unique piece of writing. I especially liked the way you mentioned the athletes names.I am excited as much as you are about the olympics coming to London.Do you know why the olympics take place?
This is really a nice work Damla and Kelvin I think you have made an
amazing writting about the Olympics
Hi Damla and Kelvin you have put alot of nice adjectives and the way you said some of the names is very clever.
I think your work is really wonderful to read and the puncuation is really good.
I am excited about the Olympics too.
Who is your favourite athlete?
keep your hard work going.
I hope you enjoy the Olympics and the Paraolympics.Your writing is really nice and I think you should write more about
the Olympics.
We love your information about the olympics what other things do you know about the olympics.