This is a really well-written 100wc which must have been taken from a favourite book of yours – however I can’t tell which book it is! Can you tell me please? 🙂
I can see you have worked really hard on your sentence construction and you have made a real effort with your use of adverbs to add description – well done. Adverbs are also a great way to start sentences; maybe this is something you could try in your next piece.
Keep reading, keep writing – I look forward to reading more.
Hi Ricky – this is a well-written 100wc, well done! I’m not sure if I’m familiar with the book you based it on – perhaps you could include the original title and author? Then people who enjoy your writing can look up the original version too!
Keep on reading!
Mr K (Team 100wc)
Hi Ricky,
This is a really well-written 100wc which must have been taken from a favourite book of yours – however I can’t tell which book it is! Can you tell me please? 🙂
I can see you have worked really hard on your sentence construction and you have made a real effort with your use of adverbs to add description – well done. Adverbs are also a great way to start sentences; maybe this is something you could try in your next piece.
Keep reading, keep writing – I look forward to reading more.
Mr Connor
Hi Ricky – this is a well-written 100wc, well done! I’m not sure if I’m familiar with the book you based it on – perhaps you could include the original title and author? Then people who enjoy your writing can look up the original version too!
Keep on reading!
Mr K (Team 100wc)