Oooo Kelvon! You just got the prompt in! Brilliant! I think you could make this piece even better by reading it through (out loud is best) then you could tweak the little things that need doing. I do hope I’ll see your work again on 100WC!
I really like this story Kelvin, especially the fact that you end with the sentence you were supposed to use, very affective!
very lovely i liked it
Its a really good story because I like when Johnny had to go far just to get a plant and it’s an adventure.
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Oooo Kelvon! You just got the prompt in! Brilliant! I think you could make this piece even better by reading it through (out loud is best) then you could tweak the little things that need doing. I do hope I’ll see your work again on 100WC!
I really like this story Kelvin, especially the fact that you end with the sentence you were supposed to use, very affective!
very lovely i liked it
Its a really good story because I like when Johnny had to go far just to get a plant and it’s an adventure.