This has lots of strands in it Claudia – parents not helping, growing plants, friends taking things! 😉 Thank you for sharing your writing on 100WC. Maybe you could take one of your ideas and make a longer story of it.
Well done for writing a piece for 100wc. This is well written, but I’m not sure it’s particularly exciting. I think the green shoot could have been like Jack and the Beanstalk…
But…I think your speech marks are excellent!
This has lots of strands in it Claudia – parents not helping, growing plants, friends taking things! 😉 Thank you for sharing your writing on 100WC. Maybe you could take one of your ideas and make a longer story of it.
Claudia,
Well done for writing a piece for 100wc. This is well written, but I’m not sure it’s particularly exciting. I think the green shoot could have been like Jack and the Beanstalk…
But…I think your speech marks are excellent!
Andrew
Team 100wc
This is a great story Claudia, I love the fact that the boy is sooooooo passionate about plants!!! 🙂
I really liked your story because the part I enjoyed was when your plant growing out of money.
I really enjoyed your story because the boy did not give up what he dreamed of.